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November 14, 2012
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Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Shutter Speed
1/250 second
Aperture
F/3.2
Focal Length
70 mm
ISO Speed
640
Date Taken
Nov 7, 2012, 3:16:48 PM
Software
Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 4.1 (Windows)
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Tuima by juhku Tuima by juhku
Bird
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My first impression is that the bowl steals the limelight. Even though the bird is the focal point and is nice and clear, it is overwhelmed by the orange cage and brightness of the bowl. His eye peering out at you does make an impression, but the impact of his isolation is lost. Also, not sure that the square cropping is the best choice. Without seeing the original, I prefer a rectangular format with a lighter color showing on the left side of the picture. That cage is rather "in your face" and overwhelming. The spacing of the bars in front of the bird is good, a piece of each part of it is well shown. The texture of the feathers is lovely. Cage leveled well within the picture. It's an "ok" picture, but not one I'd choose to purchase to display on my walls.
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chickaablet Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
So tiny~
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puffugu Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Student General Artist
This is lovely and perfect! So vibrant too, it tells a story!
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SnapColorCreations Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
Hello Hun just stopping by to let you know that your photo has been featured here :[link]: :iconcuteheartplz: :heart: :D :tighthug:
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PrettyNeonStars Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
lovely
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MeAli-ADK Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Professional Photographer
I like it :)
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